55 Fiction is a form of microfiction that renders a work of fiction within a word limit of 55 words. It is a contemporary form of expression which is greatly thriving among the neoteric writers. This is the sequent to the last microfiction.
“A soul.. I am not meant to retain empathy or pathos. But his distress provokes an unbearable pain within me. I fail to seek solace in tears. My tears have forsaken me.. They deny to escape my eyes.
Two weeks.. every night I watch him slouch onto the desolate bed, striving to blink away his tears… ”
Read Part I
5 Opinions:
Touching and deeply intriguing
As always, beauty in the words-at its epitome.. The pain reaches the readers,truly..
@Mahesh: Thank U! I am glad you liked it.
@nil: Thank U dear :D
this is so different from the first one when it comes to narration; but the emotions still touch the same chord..
Liked part I better, going on to part 3 now.
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