The Life After : I - 55 Fiction #4


55 Fiction is a form of microfiction that renders a work of fiction within a word limit of 55 words. It is a contemporary form of expression which is greatly thriving among the neoteric writers.  A few more microfictions may follow to elucidate and make headway for this concise account.
“His arms had been the warm coven I had often crumbled into. Tonight there is a void. I kneel by his bed as I watch him reach for me in his sleep.. in vain. For the world, I am departed. But I shall be here.. always, discerning his pain, but unable to comfort him.”

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adreamygal said...

dats so very beautifully written !!!

nil said...

You know,Annyesha,I've fell for all your writing,whatever you wrote. This one,however,was so brilliant,that I not only fell for it,but for the first time,I felt a lump in my throat.
Annyesha,you truly are one of my role models when it comes to writing.
Wow. Your writing inspires me.

Megha said...

This was touching...just a few words and you conveyed so much...

buckingfastard said...

creeply beautiful...takes a moment to hit u and u realize da true beauty of those words

anubhavb said...

Wow ! Amazing ! Your best 55-fiction so far (and I really liked your earlier ones as well...)

I repeat - Amazing !

The West Wind said...

@adreamygal: Thank U

@nil: Thank u so much. I am so flattered to know that someone gets inspired by what I write.. U have been a sweet one all along. I am really priviledged to have a friend like u.

@Megha: Thanks.. I tried my best..

The West Wind said...

@buckingfastard: I agree its creepily beautiful.. so nicely described.. hehe!! Thank u so much for the appreciation.

@anubhavb: Thank u for the kind words.. it might be a fiction but the feelings which brought these words to the feelings are real..

bondgal_rulz said...

Gave me the goosebumps!!!

Beautiful!!

Neha said...

Annyesha, this was a great 55er...loved it..

Gyanban said...

Capturing the right emotions in few words is a tough ask,I think you ve done so nicely here.

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