A New Beginning – 55 Fiction #3


55 Fiction is a form of microfiction that renders a work of fiction within a word limit of 55 words. It is a contemporary form of expression which is greatly thriving among the neoteric writers. This is my attempt in rendering this genre a cheerful and jaunty touch.



“Once upon a time, Zack, the puppy, peeved by the atrocities of the world, decided to migrate to a far away land. He rambled on relentlessly until he arrived in a halcyon land of pellucid skies and magnanimous flora n fauna. He was appeased.
But…   it was China...   the land where they eat dogs..”

PS: I seek clemency and compassion if I have appeared as a racist or offended anyone. All statements have been made in a jocular spirit. 



Image Source: Deviant Art


17 Opinions:

Karthik said...

Lol.. That was funny! Very well written. :)

The West Wind said...

Thank U Karthik. I am glad U like it.

Neha said...

ewwwwwww, poor dog..

but nice 55er :)

Tanmaya said...

A nice story.. i still wonder how you ppl manage to say so much in so few words...

ABHISHEK SiM said...

hahaha... ROFL! the last line was like hammer on nail. too good!

Tulika said...

:D

Hilarious!!

Too good.

சக்தியின் மனம் said...

nice

bondgal_rulz said...

Lol!!!!

I like!!!

Preeti said...

Back on your blog after a long time and once again floored by the look and feel!
This story was awesome! Funny as hell..:)

nil said...

i loved!!!! :)

nil said...

update my blog,btw:)

nil said...

*updated.

sonu said...

superb !!!! ;D ;D .. i loved it :)

The West Wind said...

Thanks everyone... this was the first time I tried sumthing closely resembling humour. I am so happy to see people actually like it :D Thanks a ton!!

@Preeti: Welcome back.. I never knew u visited my blog :D Glad u like the look and feel.

@Nils: I read ur story.. so touching.. lovely girl

@Sonu: Thank UUUU

anubhavb said...

read this and the previous post one after the other - This one sounds more like a sketch or an idea for a story though. The last one was more complete and was very impressive.

Still - Short, sweet and hilarious. Please do continue with the 55 fiction.

The West Wind said...

@Anubhav: Thanks.. this was the first time i tried my hands at humor. I guess couldn't do total justice to it. I ll try to come up with more 55ers :P Keep visiting.

Vibhuti B said...

Hey Annyesha,
firstly your style is as unique and beautiful as ur name.
Then 55 fiction is my latest interest and have attempted to take it up but I must say you excel at it!!
This piece was funny and yet sad from PETA's point of view....Kudos..
:)

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