The Rebirth - 55 Fiction #2



55 Fiction is a form of microfiction that renders a work of fiction within a word limit of 55 words. It is a contemporary form of expression which is greatly thriving among the neoteric writers. Here is the second one!  

“The frigid water was pacifying. The blade between her fingers gleamed. She strived to thrust it deep into her wrist, but barely scraped her skin. There was a sardonic defiance. The life within her stirred. The blade slipped into water and her hands veered to her venter. The indignant and resentful woman perished. 
A Mother Was Born’.”


14 Opinions:

Guria said...

How do you say so much with so little...
You descrbed a whole history with the last four words in a way that I can only wonder about. Beautiful!

Tulika said...

I was awe-struck reading this.

Amazing !!!

bondgal_rulz said...

Even though it was just 55 words, it captured the emotions perfectly.

Great 55F. :)

cheers

The West Wind said...

@Guria: Thank U :) Words are too less to describe what I tried to potray here.

@Tulika & Bondgal: Thanks. This is a genre with which I am not too familiar. So I try my best.

nil said...

Can you give me your thoughts?
No really?
I still have goose bumps..55 words.. You do magic,Annyesha. You do.

Gyanban said...

Neat. nicely packed...good choice of words.liked it.

Karthik said...

Whoa! Too good, Annyesha. I liked it.

The West Wind said...

@Nil: The magic wand is handed to me by friends like U. And girl ur thoughts are amazing themselves.. and we can always share our thoughts!!

@Gyanban & Karthik: Thank u so much guys. I value your appreciation a lot :)

ABHISHEK SiM said...

very focused and powerful. very dense - something so heavy condensed into something so small. brilliant. only a photographer could have captured the moment better perhaps. brilliant.

nil said...

Winks ;)
Love!

The West Wind said...

@Abhishek: I totally agree with u.. photographers do an amazing job. As for me, I tried my best to make it short yet to the point. Thanks for visiting my blog. I am glad u liked it.

@Nils: Wink back..
lotsa love..

Vagabond said...

good one there.
=)

Anubhav said...

Really strong stuff. Amazing.

The West Wind said...

@Vagabond & Anubhav: Thanks a lot :) And welcome here!!

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